“ What if I had said no for you that day? She asked.
“I would get to propose you again. I would have come up with some cinematic way to impress you like this “ he replied and kneeled down to give her , her favourite chocolate and teddy.
She was smiling broadly, 10 years has passed,but he never fails to surprise her:)
Breathtaking words of so much Love written, Saranya with an apt picture too.
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Thank you ☺️
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Welcome.
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Nice. Love is about falling in live with the same person again and again 😊
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Just so beautiful
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Thank you sir 🙂
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Nice one it seems similar to mine.. 🙂
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Ya you are my inspiration 😀
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Its Short sweet and simple…
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That was nice 🙂
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Aaawwww😍😍😍
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nice lines 🙂
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Thanks prem 🙂
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Hey,
I’ve created my blog where I am about to start a blog series ‘Just Friends’ which is actually an exciting love story. I’ve published it’s intro to my blog https://wordpress.com/view/theopenthought.wordpress.com
Do read it and if you like it then follow me next part is coming very soon.
Thank You ☺️
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Ahhh this is lovely! Makes my insides melt!
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awww lol you caught me off guard
I also like to catch readers off guard with my stories
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That’s nice 🙂 thank you
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love forever
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Short and sweet+cute love!
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Thanks Tanvi 🙂
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Short, sweet and to the point, constructing the idea that we never give up on the ones we love, even if they do break our heart over and over again.
However I have noticed some grammatical errors, if these were fixed the story would flow a lot better: “I would get to propose to you again” and “Kneeled down to give her her favourite…”.
Just some simple oversights, love the story. Keep up the great work!
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Thank you 🙂 that oversight was helpful 🙂
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