Love story

“ What if I had said no for you that day? She asked.

“I would get to propose you again. I would have come up with some cinematic way to impress you like this “ he replied and kneeled down to give her , her favourite chocolate and teddy.

She was smiling broadly, 10 years has passed,but he never fails to surprise her:)

Author: saranya

I am Saranya Sridharan, Software Engineer by profession and a passionate author by choice. My hobby was initially just reading and reading alone. Surprisingly, my writing spree was ignited at a Haiku competition conducted by my college. This ignited spark then rendered to offer another hobby “Blogging” into my life. I have been blogging since then for the last 6 years. I like to motivate people, inspire them to be positive in their life.But being a silent girl , i rarely get the chance to mingle with anyone to express my thoughts. So here i voice out my opinions in words. After reading this people will know this silent girl , actually have a lot to tell to this world. I stick to the simple motto in life, 'Express yourself' In any way you are comfortable with . I have started doing it. What about you !!

22 thoughts on “Love story”

  13. Short, sweet and to the point, constructing the idea that we never give up on the ones we love, even if they do break our heart over and over again.

    However I have noticed some grammatical errors, if these were fixed the story would flow a lot better: “I would get to propose to you again” and “Kneeled down to give her her favourite…”.

    Just some simple oversights, love the story. Keep up the great work!

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