Dark days

Some days were just dark
Whatever i do its still dark

I had searched for sun
But some days were just dark

I had tried to lit the light
But some days were just dark

IΒ  had tried to find the bright opening
But some days were just dark

I had wanted to hide my tears
But some days were just dark

I couldn’t do anything
Other than waiting for dawn
Because some days were really very dark

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50 responses to “Dark days

  1. Nice rhyme and very deep too.

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  2. AGE

    I feel your poem πŸ™‚

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  4. Very emotional. I liked it.

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  5. Faisal Farooque

    #Excellent

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  6. Avery dark, yet real reality that I believe all people go through several times in our lives. I believe that it is an issue we all have to overcome. I enjoyed the read so I am going to reblog it for you.

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  7. Reblogged this on Truth Troubles.

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  8. Greyrabbitsinmyhead

    Love this

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  9. Tears water the garden of our souls. And dawn always comes.

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  10. This is a very relatable piece for me, honest and beautifully penned.

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  11. U will bring light then…. Cheers to a wonderful composition….

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  12. jyo

    Emotional and Amaze write up !!

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  13. I hope you found the light; or the light found you.

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